Hey buddy,
I've noticed a few of your edits have had the same grammatical issue, so I wanted to point out a rule to you. Every sentence must have a verb. "As well as another brush, sticking out the closet door shutters, dripping paint," is not a sentence. Verbs are words that denote action. Just think that something has to be happening in every sentence.
What you're doing is creating sentence fragments. Just be careful when you break up sentences, and ensure that all parts of the sentence you break up has a verb.
You're doing really good work here, and I just wanted to help improve your quality of work in some parts. Please let me know if I can help you with this further or explain it better.
Thanks!
-Todd<ac_metadata title="Grammar"> </ac_metadata>