You wrote a plot summary that is 16 paragraphs, and some of those paragraphs are overly long and very bloated. Not to sound rude, but, nobody is going to read that. It's very, very long. So long that I rather just watch the episode instead. The plot section is also bloating up the article. You really need to trim it down, and by a lot too. It needs to be more concise.
Yeah I'm with you. Completely agree. I think it's moslty because the Welcome to Dead House plot sumary was the first one i did. I just finished the Stay out of the basement one, which is much more concise.
Just an FYI, I'm not re-writing the entire thing, i just takes what's there and update it / add relevant plot points and fix some mistaks I've noticed.
Thanks for the help :)
I recently bought every single RL Stine book and i want to make this wiki great :)
While you aren't completely rewriting anything, you do have a tendancy to keep adding more and more info to pages.
I know from personal experience that book summaries can easily become too long if you don't prioritize information. Most people who come to this Wikia want a brief plot overview. If an article is too long, it can make it unuseful. Really important info can get drowned out by less-important info if a page is too long.
I'm very much getting into this forum just as I get back into my goosebumps. I was a huge fan back in the day, and I've recently gone on a bit of a shopping spreed and bought all of the missing RL Stine books i needed. I think I have every single goosebumps book (including slappyworld #1 on pre-order).