Thread:GoosebumpsArt/@comment-31910723-20191012201825/@comment-28171460-20191024052602


 * >What exactly didn't you like about the dialogue?

It's an episode about a comedian. It's written by a comedian. But it just isn't funny.

The protagonist isn't funny, but I can forgive that because it's relevant to the plot. The issue is that ⁠— even when magic is involved ⁠— he still isn't funny to the viewer. He just starts saying names, and the onscreen crowd busts a gut. They should have worked in some actual zingers. I don't even think there's a single good joke in the episode.

Also, (maybe this is wrong to complain about, but...) everyone is a jerk. The worst offender: that one comedian lady who works alongside the protagonist. She's a gross, mean person. She technically gets her comeuppance, so it serves a purpose, but that character was painful to watch.