Thread:Murder the Clown/@comment-28171460-20180306000210/@comment-31910723-20180307173505

>A couple of days later, Kris finds a small card in Mr. Wood's pocket and reads it aloud: "KARRU MARRI ODONNA LOMA MOLONU KARRANO. YOU AND I ARE ONE NOW!". After reading the card, Kris thinks she sees Mr. Wood blink.

You reverted Sketch's edits, and even though I agree with what you did, I still think that part should be arranged. The summary says that Kris read: "Karru Marri Odonna Loma Molonu Karrano. You And I Are One Now!", while she doesn't actually know what the words mean. Maybe change it to:

A couple of days later, Kris finds a small card in Mr. Wood's pocket and reads it aloud: "''KARRU MARRI ODONNA LOMA MOLONU KARRANO."; those words can be translated to "You and I are one now." After reading the card, Kris thinks she sees Mr. Wood blink.