Board Thread:Suggestions/@comment-34202220-20180805022658/@comment-34202220-20180807143332

Sure. Let's start with...

R.L. Stine - Punctuation issues (unnecessary or missing commas, punctuation outside of quotation marks), weird bouncing between Bob and R.L., unclear pronoun reference.

Evan Ross - I marked this as "Pages needing attention" last night for several more reasons, but... then/than confusion, comma issues, shifting tenses (going back and forth between the correct literary present tense and incorrect past tense), sentence fragments.

Aaron Freidus - Massive run-on sentences. Unclear pronoun references.

Matt Amsterdam - Missing helping verbs, sentences beginning with "and," run-on sentences, shifting tenses (in the same sentences, even! - "Matt then went to the principal's office and does his best to explain...")

Amy Kramer - Sentences beginning with conjunctions. Run-on sentences. Unnecessary or misplaced helping verbs. Punctuation issues.

Calling All Creeps! - Punctuation issues (missing commas, punctuation outside of quotation marks...), shifting tenses (Additionally, many on this page are strangely verbs ending in -ing.), incorrect prepositions or helping verbs.

Casey Brewer - Incorrect formatting of possession or lack thereof (should be "Mr. Brewer's"). Incorrect tense.

Say Cheese and Die - Again! - Subject-verb agreement ("Greg becomes all the more determined to find the camera and prove his story are true."), unclear pronoun reference (Are we talking about Greg or Jonathan?), punctuation issues.

Werewolf Skin - Punctuation and capitalization issues, weird wording, sentences beginning with conjuctions.

Andy - Punctuation issues, huge run-on sentences. tense issues.

Some of the issues are definitely worse than others, but the content on most of these is primarily good, so the grammar issues aren't taking away from the enjoyment of the pages, and don't make the pages feel like complete messes. The exception, I think, would be Evan and Andy's pages, which have a lot of other issues. I tagged Evan's page "Pages needing attention" last night. I think I'll go ahead and tag Andy's now. Most of thse would be perfect after a grammar clean-up.