Thread:Fangusu/@comment-28171460-20171223211452/@comment-28171460-20171223223238


 * >Could you please be more specific about what makes the edits on Sybil Wicked problematic?

You retitled the "Physical appearance" section "Appearance", which we don't do.

You moved the "Appearance" section above the history section for unknown reasons.

You removed a large chunk of the description of Sybil's real face.

You said, "Sybil Wicked appears in the second arc" ...She hasn't appeared yet, so putting it in the present tense is a bit odd.

You seem to have missed two important rules:


 * "When editing articles, it is important to inform others about what you are doing. [...] Before making a large or potentially controversial edit, discuss your decision with an admin, in the forums, or on the talk page for the article that you're editing."
 * "Look at how other pages are arranged and try to arrange new pages in a similar style. [...] Sections like "Physical appearance" and "Personality" on character pages should always be sub-sections under the "General information" section."