Thread:GoosebumpsArt/@comment-29003107-20170918030820/@comment-28171460-20170918033329

You seem to consistently use a really, really informal style of writing on articles. Trying to sound clever or cheeky isn't as important as properly conveying information.

You don't seem to pay much attention to how articles should be formatted, and your use of second-person perspective and run-ons is problematic.