User blog comment:Dimensionshark/"Dead of Night": The lost unpublished story by R. L. Stine!/@comment-28171460-20190513152621


 * >I see his pale arms thrashing in the moonlight.
 * >I see his head sink beneath the bubbling, rushing current.

Holy moly, you weren't kidding about the story being dark. That's just page one!

Quick observations, the writing and especially the dialogue feels jilted. Maybe this isn't by Stine? Perhaps he was just writing as quickly as possible.