Thread:MJNSEIFER/@comment-33210834-20171008010704/@comment-2170890-20171009200233

Yes! That's exactly the problem with those two books - the choices are more about what happens to you, rather than what you do. It has to be seen to be believed, so I'm pleased to see you've seen it.

I like your idea about shoelaces - it would be a great tie-in to your fictional self, and a bit of realism. I actually plan on writing Choose Your Own Adventure style books one day (and have attempted it in the past), and might use that, if you don't mind.