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I will try to rewrite the Goosebumps books plots so that they aren't a plagiarism of Blogger Beware. Feel free to correct some orthographic or grammatical mistakes. These plots will be uploaded to their respective pages when they are finished, so I need you to try to correct some errors you find.

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Night of the Living Dummy III

 * Main article: Night of the Living Dummy III

Many years ago, Mr. O'Dell used to be a famous ventriloquist but now he only collects and fixes old ventriloquist dummies in his spare time. Mr. O'Dell has a collection of twelve dummies that he keeps in the attic of his house.

As the books begins, Mr. O'Dell's children, Trina and Dan, are exploring the attic. They notice one of the dummies, Rocky, talking and blinking. This turns out to be a joke by Mr. O'Dell. Soon after, Mr. O'Dell tells his children that he has just found another dummy in a dumpster. The dummy is Slappy...

After repairing Slappy's head, Mr. O'Dell names him "Smiley" and leaves the attic to answer the phone. While inspecting the dummy, Trina finds a small card in his pocket and reads its contents: "KARRU MARRI ODONNA LOMA MOLONU KARRANO. YOU AND I ARE ONE NOW!". Soon, Slappy winks at Trina and slaps her in the face. Dan doesn't believe her about what happened.

When Mr. O'Dell returns to the attic, he tells the children that their Uncle Cal and their cousin Zane will be visiting for a few days. Trina and Dan love to scare Zane, but their father makes them promise not to. Zane arrives at the house and when he enters his room to unpack his belongings, Rocky falls on him. Mr. O'Dell is sure that Trina and Dan put Rocky there to scare Zane. They deny this accusation.

That same night, Trina is awakened by Zane. He tells her that he has heard voices in the attic and is afraid to sleep. Trina offers him a snack to calm him down. When they go to the kitchen, they find Rocky sitting at the table. Both Trina and Zane believe that Dan is the culprit and they go to his room. They find him sleeping. When Trina and Zane leave the room, Rocky is lying in the hallway and they scream. Their screams awaken the whole family and Trina accuses her brother of playing with the dummy to scare them. An angry Mr. O'Dell tells his children to stop inventing stories that the dummy is alive or they will be punished.

Trina gets up early the next morning and sees Rocky sitting at the table again. She returns him to the attic before anyone notices. Zane wants to take photographs in the house with the new camera he brought with him. However, all the photos have been changed by foreground images of Rocky making mocking faces. Trina goes to the attic to confront the dummies until Slappy comes to life. He begins to insult her. Precisely, Dan enters the attic and Trina accuses him of having controlled Slappy to scare her. After a brief argument, the siblings deduce that Zane may have been the culprit in revenge for all the times they scared him.

Trina and Dan wait for the right moment to catch Zane trying to get Rocky out of the attic. He confesses everything. Finally, the kids promise not to make jokes among themselves to avoid more problems. The next morning, Zane's room is destroyed. Rocky is sitting in the middle, smiling. After Trina has a nightmare with the dummies, she finds Rocky sitting on her bed. Mr. O'Dell threatens to punish his children if they continue saying that the dummy is alive. Soon, Dan reveals having seen Zane with Rocky.

A couple of days later, the O'Dells invite their neighbors to dinner. It becomes a complete disaster when Zane's camera is destroyed. Rocky is at the crime scene. Everyone goes up to his room to investigate. When they return, the dinner table is broken and all the food is scattered on the floor and walls. Slappy is sitting at the table, smiling. That night, Trina and Dan decide to wait in the attic to catch Zane again. But instead, they catch Slappy. The dummy says that now the kids are his slaves. The siblings confront him, but Mr. O'Dell enters the attic while Slappy falls inmobile to the floor.

With his father refusing to believe that Slappy is alive, the kids throw him into a well. This doesn't stop him and the dummy returns the next morning. Later, the O'Dells, Uncle Cal and Zane leave the house to buy, leaving Trina and Dan alone. Trina remembers the card she found in Slappy's pocket. She believes that the magic words it contains will put Slappy to sleep forever. The siblings go to the attic and steal the card from Slappy while he's distracted. Dan reads its contents... and the twelve dummies in the attic come to life!

Rocky and the other dummies focus on Slappy and attack him. Soon, Zane returns and enters the attic. All the dummies fall lifeless to the floor. Seeing his cousins with the dummies, Zane accuses them with their father, causing both to be punished. The next morning, Uncle Cal and Zane return home. In revenge, Trina gives Slappy to Zane for him to "learn ventriloquism". Before they go, Trina watches Slappy winking at her from Zane's car.

The Haunted Mask

 * Main article: The Haunted Mask

Coming soon!

Bride of the Living Dummy

 * Main article: Bride of the Living Dummy

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The Haunted Car

 * Main article: The Haunted Car

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