Thread:Tjkalogianis/@comment-4207976-20160830064236

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You wrote a plot summary that is 16 paragraphs, and some of those paragraphs are overly long and very bloated. Not to sound rude, but, nobody is going to read that. It's very, very long. So long that I rather just watch the episode instead. The plot section is also bloating up the article. You really need to trim it down, and by a lot too. It needs to be more concise.

You should really check out this Wikipedia article on how to write a plot summary.

Also, I'm not trying to be rude or mean. I appreciate that you want to contribute to the wiki. I'm just trying to help you. 