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I will try to rewrite the Goosebumps books plots so that they aren't a plagiarism of Blogger Beware. Feel free to correct some orthographic or grammatical mistakes. These plots will be uploaded to their respective pages when they are finished, so I need you to try to correct some errors you find.

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Night of the Living Dummy III

 * Main article: Night of the Living Dummy III

Trina O'Dell and her younger brother, Dan, are exploring the attic of their home. Many years ago, their father used to be a famous ventriloquist but now he only collects and fixes old ventriloquist dummies in his spare time. Mr. O'Dell keeps twelve dummies in the attic, which he calls "Dummy Museum". Among his collection are Wilbur, who was the dummy with whom he acted years ago, and Rocky, a dummy with a cold, threatening look. While Dan scares his sister with Miss Lucy, the only female dummy in the collection, he and Trina watch Rocky talking and blinking!

But it just turns out to be their father controlling the dummy. Mr. O'Dell and Dan laugh at his joke, but Trina gets angry. Soon after, Mr. O'Dell tells his children that he has just found another dummy for his collection in a trash can. He shows them a dummy with his head split in half, turning out to be nothing more nor less than Slappy. Mr. O'Dell decides to call him "Smiley" and repairs his head. The phone starts ringing so Mr. O'Dell leaves the attic to answer. While inspecting the dummy, Trina finds a small card in his pocket and reads it aloud: "KARRU MARRI ODONNA LOMA MOLONU KARRANO. YOU AND I ARE ONE NOW!". Then, Slappy winks at Trina and slaps her in the face. She tells Dan what happened, but he doesn't believe her.

Mr. O'Dell returns to the attic and tells Trina and Dan that their Uncle Cal has called saying that he and his son, Zane, will come to visit and stay with them for a few days. Trina and Dan always scare Zane during his visits, but this time their father makes them promise not to scare him. Zane is interested in photographs, so he has brought his new camera with him. Zane decides to go to a room on the second floor to unpack his belongings. When he opens the door, Rocky falls on him and scare him. Mr. O'Dell is sure that Trina and Dan put Rocky there to scare Zane, but they deny that accusation. Trina and Dan ask their cousin if he would like to go the attic to see the dummies. Zane accepts because he wants to take pictures. However, Arnie, one of Mr. O'Dell's first dummies, slaps Zane when he tries to take him a picture. Trina and Dan accuse each other of having moved Arnie's arm, but all discussion ceases when Mrs. O'Dell calls them down.

That night, Trina is awakened by Zane. He tells her that he heard voices in the attic and is afraid to sleep. Trina offers to serve him a cereal bowl to calm him, but when they go down to the kitchen, they find Rocky sitting at the table! Trina and Zane are sure that Dan is trying to scare them, but when they go to his room they find him sound asleep. When they leave Dan's room, Trina and Zane find Rocky lying in the hallway and screams. Mr. O'Dell and Dan are awakened by their screams and go out to see what's going on. Trina accuses her brother of having taken Rocky out of the attic but he denies it. Angry, their father says to stop being invented that the dummy is alive or they will be punished. Everyone goes to sleep and the next morning, Trina wakes up first, goes to the kitchen and finds Rocky sitting at the table again. Quickly, she returns him to the attic before anyone notices.

Later, Zane decides to take several photographs with his camera throughout the house. When he and his cousins go to develop them, they discover that all the photos have been changed by foreground images of Rocky making mocking faces. Trina enters the attic to confront the dummies, until she hears one of them insulting her fiercely. It's Slappy! And it's starting to move!

At that precise moment, Dan appears in the attic and Trina acusses him of having controlled Slappy to scare her. After a brief discussion, Dan deduces that Zane is behind all this. He believes that Zane has been using Rocky and Slappy, and being scared on purpose to make Trina and Dan get into troubles in revenge for all the times they've scared him. The siblings decide to sneak into the attic and wait until Zane comes in to take Rocky. Their plan works and both accuse Zane of having been trying to get them in troubles. He confesses everything and finally the three kids make a truce not to joke with each other with the dummies. The next morning, after a bike ride, Trina, Dan and Zane return home only to find Zane's room destroyed and Rocky sitting in the middle, smiling.

That night, Trina has a nightmare with the dummies. When she wakes up, Rocky is sitting on her bed staring at her. Trina screams, waking her parents. Mr. O'Dell loses patience and threatens to punish his children if they continue to say that Rocky is alive. After they leave, Dan enters her room. He says that he saw Zane leaving Rocky in her bed and thinks that he destroyed his room himself. Both realize that Zane could be continuing joking with them so they decide to sneak back to the attic to catch him.

A few days later, the O'Dell's invite their neighbors to dinner in honor of Uncle Cal and Zane. Zane says that he wants to take a photo of the dinner and goes for his camera. However, he finds it totally shattered and Rocky lying next to it. Everyone goes to Zane's room to examine the camera while Zane flees crying to the first floor. Everyone goes down again for dinner, but Trina and Dan stay up. They both hear some noises below and alarm screams. When they go down, they watch their parents, their uncle and the neighbors watching the dinner table with horror. All the food scattered on the floor and walls... the table completely broken... and Slappy and Wilbur sitting in front of the table, smiling.

That night, Trina and Dan go back to the attic to watch as Zane takes Rocky again. A figure appears in the attic and lifts Rocky. The kids are sure it's Zane, but when they light him with their flashlight... it turns out to be Slappy! He tells them that they're now his slaves. Trina and Dan face him but are quickly defeated. At that moment, Mr. O'Dell enters the atic after hearing the commotion and Slappy falls motionless to the floor. Trina and Dan try to tell their father that the dummy is alive, but he refuses to believe them. After Mr. O'Dell leaves, Slappy comes back to life and reveals he was responsible for most of the disasters in the house. Angry, the siblings try to destroy Slappy's head, but discover that their father has fixed it perfectly.

Trina has a plan: throw Slappy down a well in their backyard. Slappy tries to escape from the attic but is easily caught by the kids and thrown into the well. However, the next morning, when Trina and Dan come down for breakfast, they find Slappy sitting at the table, smiling. While the kids take him back to the attic, Slappy tells them that they never be able to get rid of him. Later, Mr. and Mrs. O'Dell, Uncle Cal and Zane leave the house to buy, leaving Trina and Dan alone.

Trina remembers the card she found in Slappy's pocket and believes that if it could give him life, it could also put him to sleep again. She and Dan quietly enter the attic and find Slappy sleeping. When Trina tries to take the card out of his pocket, Slappy wakes up and surprises her. While Slappy is distracted, Dan takes out the card and reads it aloud again. Slappy doesn't fall asleep... instead, the twelve dummies in the attic come alive!

Rocky, Wilbur, Miss Lucy, Arnie and the other dummies focus on Slappy and attack him while he screams in horror. Soon, the attic door opens and Zane enters while the thirteen dummies fall lifeless to the floor. After seeing Trina and Dan with the dummies, Zane accuses them with their father, causing both to be punished.

The next morning, Uncle Cal and Zane are returning home. Before leaving, Zane ask his uncle if he can give him a dummy, because he wants to learn ventriloquism. In revenge for causing her and her brother to be punished, Trina gives him Slappy.

Finally, Trina watches Zane get into his father's car... and Slappy winks at her!

Monster Blood 2

 * Main article: Monster Blood II

The book opens with Evan Ross playing with his dog, Trigger, in his house's backyard. Suddenly, Trigger begins to increase in size. The dog holds Evan with his mouth, planning to bury him in the ground. However, it is revealed that this is only a dream. Evan wakes up screaming in his science class at school. Evan's teacher, Mr. Murphy, punishes him for falling asleep and forces him to clean the cage of the class hamster, Cuddles, after school.

In the hallway, Evan is accidentally tripped by the school bully, Conan Barber. Conan helps Evan up, but he also beats up Evan in retaliation for bumping into him. Evan softly punches Conan, but he is observed by Mr. Murphy. The teacher reprimands him for hitting Conan and sends Evan to clean Cuddles' cage. Later, while he is walking home, Evan runs into Andy. She reveals that her parents have gone abroad for a year, so she will be staying with her aunt, who lives near Evan. Andy also reveals that she has brought a gift with her: the old can of Monster Blood! When the kids inspect the can, they discover that it has been refilled with Monster Blood. They decide to bury the can in the forest. When he arrives at home, Evan finds his father making a large metal sculpture. Mr. Ross shows his son his new creation: a giant aluminum cylinder called "The Wheel". The sculpture has been accepted into an art contest that will be held at the school.

The following day after school, Evan asks Andy for help getting revenge on Mr. Murphy. Andy offers an idea: dig up the can of Monster Blood give some to Cuddles, which will cause the creature to increase in size. When the kids go to the forest to dig out the can, they discover that Conan has stolen it. The next morning, at school, Evan accuses him of having done that, but Conan locks him in a locker.

Later, Evan and Andy decide to break into Conan's house to recover the can. While Conan and his parents are away from home, the kids enter his room through the window, but they discover that Trigger has followed them. Evan and Andy decide to leave Trigger outside while they both enter the room. The Monster Blood can is near Conan's trophies. Quickly, the kids take the can and run away from the house with Trigger just as Conan and his parents return home.

Evan begins to doubt if he really wants to feed Cuddles with Monster Blood, as he fears the hamster will grow too large. Soon, Evan makes Andy promise not to use the Monster Blood as she reluctantly agrees. Evan gets sick the next morning and skips school. When he returns school, Evan discovers that Cuddles has increased his size to that of a rabbit. Mr. Murphy punishes Evan, believing that he overfeed the hamster. But Evan knows that the Monster Blood is the culprit.

The next morning, Evan arrives early at school to see Cuddles. The hamster has increased much more in size and breaks his cage! Cuddles is now the size of a dog, so Evan ties him on a leash to Mr. Murphy's desk. After school, Evan runs into Andy and accuses her of having betrayed him. Andy admits to having fed Cuddles with Monster Blood. She apologizes and says that what she did was a big mistake.

The next morning, Evan and Andy arrive early at school, just in time to see a ten feet tall Cuddles breaking the desk and getting rid of his leash. Mr. Murphy appears and tries to stop Cuddles using a chair and the leash, but the hamster easily chews and destroys the chair. Evan thinks quickly and remembers that his father's sculpture resembles a giant hamster wheel.

Evan and Andy run to the gym and bring the sculpture to the classroom, but Cuddles simply destroys it. Conan enters the classroom and is caught by Cuddles, who plans to devour him. Evan has a new idea: he is going to eat some Monster Blood to increase his size and he will lock Cuddles in a supply closet. The Monster Blood can is stored in Evan's locker, but when he and Andy open it, a giant Monster Blood wave comes out of the locker!

Evan grabs a bit of Monster Blood and swallows it, starting to increase in size. He enters the classroom and faces Cuddles, which is about the same size. Unfortunately, Cuddles quickly defeats Evan and everything seems lost until a loud explosion is heard. Evan and Cuddles return to their original sizes while the Monster Blood shrinks again.

Andy picks up the Monster Blood can and notices that today was the Monster Blood's expiration date. Evan is hailed as a hero by Mr. Murphy and Conan. As a reward, Mr. Murphy decides to give him Cuddles as a gift. That night, Andy visits Evan with a surprise: her parents have brought her a Monster Blood can from Germany! Andy says that she has already opened the can, but she promises not to use it.

Finally, without anyone noticing, Cuddles eats some Monster Blood from the can...

The Ghost Next Door

 * Main article: The Ghost Next Door

Hannah Fairchild is having a very boring summer. All her friends have left Greenwood Falls for vacations, except her. Hannah always write letters to them but none of her friends seems to write her back. To hang out, Hannah makes bonfires in the backyard of her house and tells ghost stories to her younger brothers, Bill and Herb.

Bride of the Living Dummy

 * Main article: Bride of the Living Dummy

Coming soon!

The Haunted Car

 * Main article: The Haunted Car

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