Thread:ErnestoCabral2016/@comment-31910723-20180206132116/@comment-28171460-20180210020315

While correcting summaries from both of you, I've noticed a problem. Your paragraphs are too short. A paragraph should have 5-8 sentences in it.

having a few short-paragraphs is fine, but a majority of your paragraphs should be regular sized. Remember to conserve article space.